The piece is coming together nicely! I'm looking forward to the addition of gradients on the individual utensils. I think if you change the direction on each, it will make the pieces stand out more against the bike frame. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing your background. I think it can really give context to the meaning behind this piece.
This is such an improvement. I love where you're going with this. I can definitely pick out the appliances in the piece easier. Definitely think about maybe a subtle background that doesn't take away too much from this. That's my suggestion.
Love the addition of the parts of the wheel. This is such an interesting piece. Everytime you think you've seen all the parts, you find something else! I agree with Hunter, you need a subtle background to support, rather than distract from the piece. It's so stunning on its own, you don't want to lose that
Yeah, I think it is a lot easier to pick out all of the appliances now! I still think this a brilliant concept and that you took a very different direction on the assignment, which is turning out well!
I love this piece. I love your thought process on where to place the kitchen items. I would say to maybe create more contrast because the bike just looks really gray and I feel like if you throw in some more blacks and whites it will really make this piece pop.
Adding those values to the bike definitely makes the pieces more readable. As for communicating all the concepts you put in it, I feel like you could go in the direction of a blueprint where the kitchen equipment is labeled. If the idea is not the direction you were thinking, I had an idea for the background. Seeing that there was an initial idea of a pizza cutter for the wheels, maybe the bike could be ontop of a giant pizza. That could be fun to have sauce/cheese flying up as the bike runs over it. So far, I love the overall concept.
Nice texture to the bike here, really brings out the different items. Don't really have any critique to add, just keep it up and I'm excited to see how it turns out!
I agree with playing with the details more, i'd make it alil bit more sharper. What about the background? I like the idea that someone said in class the other day about making it look like a blueprint. I think that would look cool.
I like the sketchy style (and I am pleasantly surprised you managed to pull it off in illustrator). In my mind, it reinforces the idea that the bike is kinda rigged together from different components.
I am looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with it composition wise. It works right in the middle of the page, but I think you can make the piece even better by playing with the composition.
This is great! I love the style. Making it darker really helps out. It looks better from a distance, and also makes the kitchen supplies stand out more, so you know what you're looking at. Looks awesome!
Is this an illustrator file? It looks like a pencil sketch, not necessarily a good thing if we are creating vectors? You have added so many details it is hard to see the concept. It looks like a new fangled motorcyle. I think the background/environment will be critical in informing viewers of the idea. Need to get this in Illustrator asap.
everything is a lot more recognizable! it looks great! Im curious though of what youre going to do with the background!
ReplyDeleteThe piece is coming together nicely! I'm looking forward to the addition of gradients on the individual utensils. I think if you change the direction on each, it will make the pieces stand out more against the bike frame. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing your background. I think it can really give context to the meaning behind this piece.
ReplyDeleteThis is such an improvement. I love where you're going with this. I can definitely pick out the appliances in the piece easier. Definitely think about maybe a subtle background that doesn't take away too much from this. That's my suggestion.
ReplyDeleteLove the addition of the parts of the wheel. This is such an interesting piece. Everytime you think you've seen all the parts, you find something else! I agree with Hunter, you need a subtle background to support, rather than distract from the piece. It's so stunning on its own, you don't want to lose that
ReplyDeleteYeah, I think it is a lot easier to pick out all of the appliances now! I still think this a brilliant concept and that you took a very different direction on the assignment, which is turning out well!
ReplyDeleteI love this piece. I love your thought process on where to place the kitchen items. I would say to maybe create more contrast because the bike just looks really gray and I feel like if you throw in some more blacks and whites it will really make this piece pop.
ReplyDeleteAdding those values to the bike definitely makes the pieces more readable. As for communicating all the concepts you put in it, I feel like you could go in the direction of a blueprint where the kitchen equipment is labeled. If the idea is not the direction you were thinking, I had an idea for the background. Seeing that there was an initial idea of a pizza cutter for the wheels, maybe the bike could be ontop of a giant pizza. That could be fun to have sauce/cheese flying up as the bike runs over it. So far, I love the overall concept.
ReplyDeleteNice texture to the bike here, really brings out the different items. Don't really have any critique to add, just keep it up and I'm excited to see how it turns out!
ReplyDeleteI agree with playing with the details more, i'd make it alil bit more sharper. What about the background? I like the idea that someone said in class the other day about making it look like a blueprint. I think that would look cool.
ReplyDeleteI like the sketchy style (and I am pleasantly surprised you managed to pull it off in illustrator). In my mind, it reinforces the idea that the bike is kinda rigged together from different components.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with it composition wise. It works right in the middle of the page, but I think you can make the piece even better by playing with the composition.
This is great! I love the style. Making it darker really helps out. It looks better from a distance, and also makes the kitchen supplies stand out more, so you know what you're looking at. Looks awesome!
ReplyDeleteIs this an illustrator file? It looks like a pencil sketch, not necessarily a good thing if we are creating vectors? You have added so many details it is hard to see the concept. It looks like a new fangled motorcyle. I think the background/environment will be critical in informing viewers of the idea. Need to get this in Illustrator asap.
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